Title: SplinteredAuthor: A.G. Howard
Publisher: Amulet Paperbacks
Date of Publication: February 18th, 2014
Format: Paperback
Page Count: 371
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Recommended? Yes
Similar Books: Wicked, by Gregory MaGuire
My Rating: ★★★☆☆
I started reading this book last year and put it on hold because I wanted to have access to the other two books in the trilogy before I finished it, as I expected to rebound straight into Unhinged upon finishing Splintered. Generally speaking, I like to read a series back to back, though sometimes it doesn't work out that way and I get bored (or I'm waiting on the next book in the series).
Perhaps in part because of this break between starting the book and finishing it, I have mixed feelings about the novel in general and I feel a bit unsteady upon having finished it.
This book sucked me in, and I am not what I would consider a "Wonderland fan." It was a new adventure for me, a trip into something that I've never explored but which I quickly found that I enjoyed. The novel if fascinatingly atmospheric and I could feel the setting as I read. I fell into Wonderland the way that one would hope to fall down the rabbit hole, and it was quite easy to fall into Alyssa's (and Alison's) madness. Atmosphere can be difficult to write well, and Ms. Howard did a wonderful job of pulling me into the setting of her book. That's definitely something that I can appreciate!
I enjoyed the story well enough. It was twisted and wicked and surprising in many unexpected ways. The author does a great job of making the Wonderland story unique, and she ties up loose ends (which is often unusual in young adult fiction). These are things that I can appreciate from any author, and things that I definitely enjoyed about the story. Unlike Wicked (by Gregory Maguire), Ms. Howard didn't leave me feeling confused: She was able to give me enough information as the story went along to come to my own conclusions and to enjoy the story.
Where the book falls apart for me is in characterization. The characters come across as invariably flat, like they are missing something critical that would make them whole people in the mind of the reader. Unlike many reviewers, I don't hate Jeb (one of the two love interests -- what is it with love triangles these days?) for being sexisty -- I dislike his lack of development, the lack of strong negative traits, the fact that he could have been more in this book. The same goes for Alyssa and Morpheus as well, so it's difficult to dislike Jeb when he is no different from the other characters in the book. They blend together, and this book is therefore more focused on the story than on the characters in it.
I want more from the authors who I read, certainly in terms of the characters that they write, and this is something that Ms. Howard could focus on a bit more in her writing. She needs to know more about her characters than she puts into her story, but I want more from them in general. So Alyssa and Jeb are both artistic people with an interest in skating. Not only are they too alike to make them a logical romantic interest, but that's too flat. What else interests them? What television shows do they watch in their down time? What sorts of habits do they have (good and bad)? These are the sorts of things that define the character, even if it never comes up in the story and the sheer alikeness of Alyssa and Jeb makes them boring for me as a reading.
This is what makes Morpheus stand out to the reader: There's more to him, he's not like Alyssa. He's not a short cut. He's the real central character to this story, and Ms. Howard would do well to fully develop the other characters in order to match him -- even if she views them as being tertiary or incidental to the story. Every character ought to be important if they are to be included.
It's the lack of whole people -- whole characters -- that brought this book down for me. The book itself is beautiful with a gorgeous cover and beautiful purple font and illustration. Visually, this book is very appealing, and I enjoyed the atmosphere of the book enough to carry me into the second book in the series.
Splintered could, however, carry its own weight without plowing into the second book in the series, however, based on the fact that the book does have a complete ending. This is rare and appreciated, as it doesn't drive me straight into Unhinged when my to-be-read shelf is stacked higher than I can manage right now.
I hope to see better things in Unhinged!








